Keese (276 views)

[dreaminglionesse]

Given Info!

Name: Keese

Species: Keese comes in three different colors to protects herself in harsh enviroments. Magma, Ice, and Shadow. Magma for extremely hot places, Ice for the cold, and Shadow as her normal day to day form.

Anthro/Quad: Quad.

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Status: Single/Not looking for anyone

Job: Keese is a theif, as she never had a real home and is always on the go to help provide just for herself.

Organisation: N/A

Heart: Good. She may be a theif but Keese's intentions are to feed herself and ensure her own survival in the world.

Homeland: Keese was born in the Haunted Woods, as an experiment.

House: Keese is homeless.

Special: Autism. (Tends to be an issue most of the time, but also helps her crack puzzles in times of need, such as vaults or safehouses.) MPS (Multiple Personality Syndrome), Depression, Anxiety, Kleptomaniac.



Appearance Keese appears to be a normal Shadow Korbat that hails from the Haunted Woods a lot of the times. She appears as a Magma Korbat and an Ice Korbat when the situation needs it.

Hair: N/A

Eyes: Red (magma), black (shadow), blue (ice), Long lashes, thin eyebrows.

Skin: Clean

Clothing: N/A



Personal Info!

Personality: Fire Keese has a tendency to want to destroy things. Ice Keese wants to cool off the heat from Fire Keese, and Keese is the balance between the two. It's still a hard struggle for Keese to balance Fire and Ice Keese, and always has to pick a side to go with. Sometimes Keese becomes frusterated and tends to yell at herself.

Past: Keese was born in the Haunted Woods as an experiment. This means she has no relations what so ever except for the mad scientist that had created her, whom for she loaths with all her heart, in each and every form she has. Keese used her Magma form to destroy his lab and all his other experiments, as that crazy Lutari ran away in the midst of it all. She seeks out his demise, and to stop any future plans of his that is inteded for her own doom.

Plus: The ability to change her form into the element of fire or ice. Uses fire to melt even the hardiest of metals.

Minus: A fiery shock wave erupts from her fire form when Keese becomes over stressed, burning everything and everyone in her path in a 15 feet radius. It snows/rains often and hard when Keese is extremely depressed/low on energy.

Extra: N/A

[Raichi]

Hi Thanks for submitting your cool character.

Here's a little feedback to help get her approved:
The whole changing paint brush color thing should not be possible unless she had a gazillion PB's to her disposal or a free pass at the magma pool. I get how being a science experiment can be a loophole to this and allow her to change forms, so even though it's not conform to the setting to change colors without the canon means to do so, I'm okay with it as long as you provide more information in her past section on what kind of experiments and what the motives of this scientists were. With the little information you provided now I can't possibly let her change forms between 3 different paint brushes.

The minus information, even though it's not in her advantage, is actually plus information. Anything that can work to damage/harm others is regarded as an ablity/plus. Anything that others can harm her with, so her weaknesses, are regarded as a minus.

For every physical plus, you need to have an equally strong physical weakness. And for her mood influencing the effect on the weather should definitely have a radius as well. I would say these are pretty strong qualities if she learns to control them, so I expect some decent weaknesses in her minus section to compensate for her power.

[Kepiloth]

OK, I have something to say on this. Having no control of what can be a positive is still a negative. If you can't control your power, it will hurt those closest to you. Imagine if Keese let that burst of fire fly in the Haunted Woods? Not a pretty picture. So it can be both positive and negative. Wade Wilson aka Deadpool, knows this too well. His many attempts at suicide end in failure due to his having the same regenerative powers as Wolverine. He even once tried to get the Hulk to kill him. For basic weaknesses, Keese would have a weakness to ice in Magma form, fire in Ice form, and light in Shadow form. Her lust for vengeance coupled with her psychosis can drive her slowly mad as most revenge stories have rather bad endings.

What Dreaming is calling Multiple Personality Disorder is actually called Dissociative Identity Disorder. Often the personalities have no awareness of each other. An example of this is the character Knell from the web comic Antibunny.(Spoilers start here) She created Furi, an assassin alter-ego, as a way to carry the burden of taking lives. Often she would wake up somewhere when she clearly remembered being elsewhere, sometimes covered in wounds. She even attempts to kill herself with Furi stopping her every time.(Spoilers end here)

Knell



Furi